WALT improve sentences so that they create a picture in the readers mind

1. The cat sat at his food bowl

"Sally fat greedy cat purred as his sad huge green eyes peered down at his empty bowl" By Jannah

"Yesterday, the hungry lonely and sad cat sat down while his fiery red eyes glared into his empty bowl" By Emma

"The small hungry kitten slobbed at his dry slimy cat food" By Sam

2. My garden is nice in spring

"My lush green garden is always best when the great seasonal spring comes round to New Zealand" By Nick

"My colourful garden lights up like a beautiful sunset" By Tennille

3. I'm so hungry

"Tummy rumbles and sickly feeling... all the things I'm feeling. In other words I'M HUNGRY!" By Alanna

CONGRATULATIONS

CONGRATULATIONS TO THE FOLLOWING....

* Outstanding results in Room 5 with their efforts in cross country! We had Emma, Jannah and Jamie make it through to the inter-school this year! I am very proud of you all that participated and gave it a good go.

* Emma - 4th place at inter-school! Congratulations that is an outstanding result! We are so lucky to have you join Ashhurst School!
* Jannah and Jamie - both gave it 100% and were placed in the top half of the runners. Well done you two!

* Also, I would like to congratulate Tennille, Britney, Madison and Jannah for making it into the DJ netball tournament team - Kai Pai you guys!

Mrs Amos